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Click here"Fuck, fuck, fuck," he hissed.
I still couldn't open my eyes, which was a shame, really, because I loved watching him come. His huge heavy balls settled against my vagina and hot gobs of semen splashed all over my chest and face. Jake painted my body with his thick seed, liberally, and his balls bouncing against my cunny and clit drove me to yet another climax. I writhed under the rainfall of his ejaculate, feeling it spattering hot against my skin and into my open mouth.
He must have intentionally directed some of that incredible volume of semen towards my lips, because a truly massive rope of cum found its home in my mouth, then another and another. I closed my mouth, but before I could swallow, Jake dropped his still spitting cock onto my body and fell over me, shoving his tongue into my mouth and kissing me deeply. He didn't seem to care that I had a mouthful of his cum, and he was kissing me so hard that I couldn't swallow. His semen just kind of washed all over our tongues and mouths. When his lips smacked closed lightly against mine, I swallowed, but then his big tongue licked up and over my chin and pushed even more thick semen into my mouth. He licked cum from my face and fed it to me with kisses for a while, eventually working on my throat, even slurping it off of my breasts.
When he finally stopped, he laid down beside me and rolled me onto my side to face him, pulling me into his warm embrace with his arms around me.
My God. I had never, ever, been so incredibly and wholly and utterly fucked in my life. As Jake pressed delicate kisses to my face and hair and smoothed his hand up and down my back from neck to rear end, I had only one regret.
That he hadn't come inside me.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoOutstanding storytelling continues in this chapter, with strong characters and a swiftly moving plot that holds the attention of the reader throughout. Five stars.
Anonymousabout 3 years agoCareful Becca, you can get pregnant from precum. Whether or not Jake orgasms inside you might not really matter.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoFrom what I know of Dan this situation would absolutely not be okay with him. Fucking your husbands best friend, multiple times, under his own roof? No, that doesn't fall within his guidelines, especially since she hasn't said word one about her frustrations. As to Ryan's "rejection" last chapter, damn, maybe let him have a shower after he works all day. Better yet, find a job or hobby to keep busy. Less time to fuck his buddies that way.
None of that matters since I'm sure Ryan is somehow involved in the whole thing. I'm less confident now though that his reasons are going to be satisfying.
I like how Jake has read Anita Blake too. Yeah right.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoI just came across this series and am really enjoying it! It's a fantasy, it's hot and sexy - just what I expect from stories on this site. You have a great style and it is a pleasure to read well written pieces. I really love the pussy eating scenes! Sooooo sexy, yum. I hope they continue in the following chapters as Jake is a real talented cunnilinguist ; )
redskyesalmost 11 years agoAuthorYes, Jake is larger than life. Or Becca's perception is. ;) Exaggerated perception is a fairly common theme among my non-scifi stories.
And Ryan isn't done. He'll come back into play later on. His character will flesh out a bit more. In the beginning, I wanted his character to be rather flat, because that's how Becca sees him lately.
Thank you for the kind words!
redskyesalmost 11 years agoAuthorI quite enjoy Nalani, so I will take that as a great compliment. Thank you!
Iwannadoitnowalmost 11 years agoThey finally fucked!
No problem with how and why she has fallen out of love with her husband.
She has certainly shown great determination in not giving in to her obviously developing wish to have Jake fuck her.
But the last neglect in her marital bed was certainly enough to justify her surrender.
I do think it is somewhat legitimate to say you might have developed Ryan further as a character, just for better understanding of what his problem might be.
And as said elsewhere, Jake is "larger than life" truly. I think he could be well hung without being a freak, and the story would benefit from that.
But these are small quibbles over what is truly a well written and well organized story, with great sexual appeal to your readers, me included. I laughed, and loved it for you, the author, when one of the readers set aside a book he had been waiting for, to read the next installment. Brother, THAT'S applause!
radiodemonalmost 11 years agoMy ARC of Nalini Singh's Heart of Obsidian was waiting for me when I got home today. I put off reading it until I could finish this installment. Considering I've been waiting for months for that book (and whining about it, loudly), that's a pretty big deal.
I thought the first two parts were good. The writing is tight, and you get a good picture of the SURFACE of Becca and Ryan's marriage. But when you started developing Jake later on in part three and into part four, it went from good to great. Great enough I put off reading a book I'm planning to devour shortly LOL
On the comments about the cheating aspect...go read the chapter in Dan Savage's new book, American Savage, called Cheating is Never Okay (except when it is). He acknowledges that sometimes a marriage is great, wonderful, and breaking it apart would be devastating...except when one person's sexual needs aren't being met. He explains it far more eloquently than I can summarize, but that's what you're doing here. Becca's trying to make her marriage work (well, except for the whole not talking to Ryan about it thing) so she's going elsewhere. I don't have a problem with it, and to paraphrase Mr. Savage, if you don't like reading stories about cheating, then don't read them!
Stiaalmost 11 years agoDon't give up hun. I've read every story you've written and have loved every one.
I find them griping and interesting and I love the way you write. I'm not great at giving positive or negative criticism, so just know you have a fan.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoPlease carry on writing this - the way Jake talks and behaves -even his facial expressions- reminds me exactly of someone I know.
