All Comments on 'Taking Chel'

by Gabrieltane

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
loved it!

Can't wait to read the next part of the story with the wife!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Nice premise

But, when it happens, the sex happens too fast. So much more could have taken place that involved teasing: him teasing her and her teasing him before the fucking.

And you really need a proofreader:

There's a big difference between chesS (which is what you wrote) and chesT

(which is what you meant).

It's spelled mastUrbation, not mastErbation.

If it hadn't been for the high ration I'd have stopped reading there.

In the end, I gave it 4 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great story

Please write the next part soon as I loved it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Nice

I enjoyed it.

Thankyou.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
PLEASE PART 2!!!!

More Gane/Chel sex please!

And maybe a 3way with mom!

Awesome story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Loved it! Perfect personally relatable sex. Who cares if there isnt that much teasing when you want it that bad!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

"Thrust" not "thrusted".

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