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by Lynda68

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good story

I really enjoyed your story - but.will you please learn the proper use of did and done?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Amongst

other silly errors, check out the difference between 'cant' and 'can't'!

Clue - 'can't' is a short version of 'can not'!

LegallySaneLegallySanealmost 4 years ago
Couldn't....

get past her fucking him in the ass with a strap-on. Disgusting.....

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Middle aged crossdresser. wltm similar. I tend to rattle off my stories. I have re-read them sometimes. But found myself writing something totally different to what I intended. So please excuse the bad grammar. Obviously if you want to volunteer so edit..... All comments are...