All Comments on '"Taking" My Sister's Virginity'

Good but he should have pounded their bum holes

I just love sister/brother incest and adding mom makes me so hard just loved this story

Nylon is a material used to make STOCKINGS, which before its invention were made of silk. Silks expensive which is why NYLON was eventually used. You can still buy SILK stockings of course. I say this because I feel like the author is confused or at least is confusing the two. By saying “nylons”, he’s referring to nylon stockings. By saying “silky”, he’s referring to the feel of the nylons which imitate the softness, at least somewhat, of silk. But I wish a true, definitive line could be drawn in his stories since pretty much everyone includes nylons, pets or sluts and feet worshiping. Telegraph much? How about a little variation in what your characters like instead of just filling them with your own kinks. That being said, I really liked the story overall and give it five stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Really good story.

Falls for his sister and yet fucks mom. Adding mom ruins the whole story, honestly. Makes the relationship between the siblings that develops over the story, seem phony.

Would be a 5 if others hadn’t of been included

One of the best stories I have come across. Kept my interest the whole time.

I find it so hard to believe that one author (you of course) can get it perfect every time. But you are still hitting it right on the nose. Great story. (I'm the one reading all your list from top to bottom). (:

Most incest stories read like they were written by immature, 14-year-old boys, full of poor grammar, repetition, awkward contradictions, and unrealistic scenarios, to the point of making me feel like puking rather than ejaculating.

While this one is far from being totally plausible, it does draw the audience in, although Lisa could have been better cast as an innocent girl fraught with sexual tension, rather than a common slut.

The story began innocent enough, setting both the scenario and tone, as the momentum and intensity slowly built to euphoric ecstasy, culminating in the passionate limousine sex scene, with Lisa begging Eddie to ejaculate his load of semen deep inside her unprotected virgin cunt.

I went from "how could anyone ever want to even look at this prudish young woman", to craving this beautiful, sexy submissive for myself, strongly desiring to be her brother. I was captivated by this fictional tale to the extent it almost became real to me. Andrea's character role added an interesting perspective as the go-between representing both parties.

Despite having six attractive sisters, I have never had an incestuous thought about any of them, yet I sometimes fantasize during sex, about young, make believe sisters and brothers getting totally sexually immersed in each other, sometimes ending in pregnancy and childbirth.

Step brother / sister incest stories and porn do nothing for me, as they are 'unrelated siblings' who happen to live under the same roof. Having the same parents substantially increases the immorality aspect of the relationship, and when they are fucking each other in the house with their parents home, it dramatically adds to the suspense, with the risk of being discovered.

Perhaps the ending could have been left for a future story, as it turned them into one fucked-up disgusting family. This one instead closing with Lisa culminating her love for her natural brother by intentionally letting him impregnate her would have added an interesting problematic twist, but there are so many ways of writing great literotica.

last page ruined a semi-decent story.

Quite enjoyed for the most part. The ending I could have done without to keep some realism. IMO I think the sister catching the brother with the friend and then joining may have been more realistic but thats just me.

I had to skim past the entire texting nonsense... then the calling women his "slut" for no good reason. So, by the time the mom joins in for a threesome, it was like a telegraphed punchline delivered by a hack comic. I don't always hate a trashy story but this was pretty stupid on too many fronts.

I agree with mfkndragon. Leave out all of the slut calling. I've been around for a long time and have never heard any of my friends calling girls they were going out with a slut. And I certainly never did. I only read it here on Literotica from several different writers. The stories would be much better without calling the girls (Sluts).

Very horny. Would like another chapter.

You could have left the whole slut calling and dom and submissive out there is nothing hot about it just kills the mood for any real man but it was 1 heck of a fantasy really thinking he knows what women want only in a fansty is that going to happen no man knows everything that a woman wants like was implied only real down fall is the dom and submissive and slut calling again it just kills the mood for a real man so with that I give it a 2 star rating cause your fantasy seems to kill the mood this isn't the only story I have read that has mentioned this and every time it killed the mood and story

I love how submissive and EAGER Andrea is. He just snaps his fingers and she teleports onto his dick hahaha! 😆

Liked it very much super hot especially when he takes moms pussy.

Good story.

One of the best stories i have ever read on this site. You are a master at keeping the story line moving and real. Great story!!!!!!!

I think the best part was when he done threesome with mom and sister but the whole story in itself was great.

I do think Eddie is the luckiest guy on earth fucking his mom and sister to.

I only got to fuck two of my sisters but really wanted to fuck mom most of all.

Bob

Great story with a great twist at the end

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They say, "incest is best.... as long as you keep it in the family!"

it would be nice if you would continue this story

Another 5 star tale with a complete ending. I like the idea of just continuing with a great tale instead of an entirely new story. If all the writers did that using great stories readers would have less complaints & give higher scores. I realize many stories don’t deserve being continued, but many do.

Bill S.

I’ve read most of your stories and I must say this would be one of the best if not the best story. What a shome you didn’t continue on with it there’s so much more to this story.. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Very hot story. Mom and daughter going lesbo while the son/brother fucks them both is incredible!

It was 5 stars until the last couple of paragraphs, then it got to where I couldn't "suspend my disbelief"

Thirty six stars that’s five stars for each and every page and then six stars ⭐️ on top for one of the wickedest stories I have ever read on this or any other site Christ my balls where tingling all the way through your story and just as I felt it couldn’t get any better Mom joins in Christ I nearly shot my load without touching myself once while reading this fantastic story ( I was in mixed company while reading) but by the end I nearly came in my pants and I’m a 63 year old man with all the problems old age can bring to a man so Thank as I really felt great while reading this fantastically great Story I just can’t Thank you enough for your brilliant writing and and ball tingling content Once again Thank you as you made all my Christmas’s cum at once

6 stars....

The more stories that I read that were penned by you, the bigger the smile on my face. Damn, keep up the great work please.

it started good and I loved it at first but then the guy lost his cool and became a stuttering idiot

Wow, eine sehr gut aufgerollt Geschichte. Immer wieder auf eine neue Stufe der Geilheit gehievt, mein Schwanz wurde immer härter.

Die dirty Talks einfach weiter aufgeilend, meine blanke Eichel ständig feucht vom Vorsaft, grrrr schmeckt köstlich.

Am Ende schoss meine heiße Sahne nur so raus aus meinem total harten Schwanz, einfach supergeil.

Awesome ending with mom!

I've read a lot of your stuff. This one is the best so far.

One thing that bugs me though. Silk and nylon are two different materials. You use the terms interchangeably.

It's not a big deal. I just substitute silk stockings in my mind when I read either.

Wonderful story. I was cheering for Lisa at the end.

Your first sentence got me hard and it stayed that way the whole story.

Another AWESOME story.

A beautiful twisted plot .

Never thought of the Mom joining together.

Looking forward to a follow up with Aunt Beverly.

5 Stars and more

Loved it

"girls always say they want a nice guy, but that is bullshit...they all fantasize about the bad boy and I...am a bad boy"

I cringed so hard that I couldn't get an erection again

Great story. Loved the read. I used to bang my secretary over her office desk from behind and she always wore stockings and a garter belt. Amazing.

Holy crap, the show stopper and limo conversation..I expected the bosses wife to join in..

Great lead in and out ..this story is a fav..

Still waiting on membership approval, so I can start marking for return reads.

Thanks..

all i can say i came on this one lol dam good story

Seducing his sister's girlfriend was easy and hot. Seducing his sister was stretching it, but also was hot. Pulling mom into the picture --- that was just too much, totally implausible, gratuitous and unnecessary. Rather than adding to the power of the story, it detracted. Sometimes (often) less is more. Leave more open to future possibility and imagination and you'll have a better story. Hinting at what he might have hoped could happen in the future is as far as you should have taken the mother part of it. Like so many authors in this forum, you tried to do too much. The story would have been far better without the ridiculously far-fetched ending.

You've done it again home run, the twist at the end was so sexy, having Lisa know what was going on, nothing hotter than a virgin who is ready not to be virgin anymore, adding mom was totally unexpected

@sexymeup

Your comment says just what I was about to write. Somewhat like a pornflic for adolescent guys (and girls if this might be the case) or those who never mature.

Fun read, it was good that she knew what was up and wanted the same.

Talk about wild , but this is sheer craziness, no ?

Why didn’t they wake up the Father and jizz and bang him too ?

When I was even more stupid than I was young, I could never understand why attractive older sisters didn't alleviate the "discomfort" they knew their younger brothers felt almost constantly.

Had 5* going into Xmas, lost one with Mom. really enjoyed the bro-sis, even Andrea, but then it turned into a high school guy's idea of a sexy story. Should have left well enough alone.

What a Lovely SEXY story of BROTHER ( ADAM ) enjoying rupturing Lisa's Hymen !!

I hope you will write back to my E.mail address A.S.A..P. !!

Ramesh, Murthy, A RETIRED PSYCHIATRIST currently stuck in BANGALORE CITY, struggling to get a certificate of immunity before travelling back to Manchester from Bangalore India by OMAN AIRLINE'S FLIGHT FROM MUSCUTT .

Absolutely marvelous, and one of the very best Bro-Sis stories ever. And adding a horny, beautiful mom to the equation was a final golden stroke. Thanx for the Great Read!

Another great story.. london K

So sensual! This story was very well written great plot , storyline. Love your style. Thank you

I gave this rubbish zero stars, Eddie was an asshole with a big ego who thinks he is god's gift to women who thinks women just drops their panties because he says so. and becomes his sex slave he just uses them as a cum bucket for him and has no respect for women, forcing the girl to swallow his cum knowing she didn't like it, that was like a rape to me, also no man alive can cum that much, that is total bullshit too, you think readers are total retards to believe that within a week the mom would just walk in and fuck him. Just because he has a 7 " cock doesn't mean every girl or woman he meets will want to fuck him. Get real, and another thing that is bullshit, that many women are not going to be willing to share him just because he wants to fuck other women. very rarely will women want to share

Smokin. Very hot story. Loved that Andrea was a double agent and that mom and her stockings got in on the fun.

I gotta be honest, I didn't like this at all...

I bloody loved it. You have once again made a masterpiece sikstockingslover!

He shouldnt be fucking Andrea

This story was very HOT! Loved rvery written moment. DAMN!! The only thing with these stories is the Dad is always left out. Would have loved finding out that the Dad was

fucking Andrea to. Happened one night when he was driving her home or catching her in the swimming pool. Hmmmm

OMG! This is fucking hot!

Holy hell, has the author ever seen a naked women in real life? This shit was cringy as fuck and coulnd't be faker.

Well Done!!!!! I loved the way you set and followed the story board. Great character introduction and integration. Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more of your stuff. Again keep up the great work!!!!!

it needs more chapters.

"They continued chatting, but eventually it became all touchy feely and I dozed off." Guys. We know what we like and the rest is just boring, what can I say?

A nice progression from sis's best friend through virgin sis to horny mom, with auntie still off in the wings. Very nice indeed. thanx for the read!

I've read some of your words in the past, came back for a reread of Backseat Mom (loved it), and checked this one out instead. Awesome story, especially the thigh highs, a great read even if it didn't get a physical reaction out of me. Write on!

I really liked the whole story and especially the part of the sister and her best friend. It was a great read of the playing together and then putting the con on the brother. But he was good for it all! Thank you and I'll be reading a lot more of your work!!

Hield atijd van mijn 17 jarige broer. Zijn pik lang en dik. Ik was jonger en verliefd en gaf mijn maagdelijkheid aan hem. Het genot was overweldigend! We zijn nog samen voor altijd.

Mooi verhaal dat vaker voitkomt dan men denkt. 5 sterren waard!

Kiss Wendy S.

very expressive for sure

It makes want to have some good fuck

This story was amazing.... every detail explained and was a fun read.. 5 stars ⭐️

I will be reading more from you..

Thank you

This makes me want a brother 🤤

I would so love for my brother to take my virginity. I'm 18 and he's 16 and he has such a long dick. This stuff gets me off, thank you for everything you write.Z

i must say one of your best i am a huge fan of your work the detail and structure like i was actually seeing it happen

I absolutely loved how you played this one out!! Excellent development and story flow!! I wish there were more than 5 Stars!! Thank you :)

A story well told. It has pace, continuity and , most importantly, humour.

Keep up the good writing :) That was very hot !!! Loved it !

I gave this story three stars because it took five pages that could have been told in two or at the most three.

Your stories are always phenomenal...lengthy but worth the wait....bring in mom made this story great. don't listen to naysayers...there is a reason why they only complain and have not wrote any stories to share on this site. they suck! good job! bravo!

I just love your incest stories. I gets me so hot I have to jump my hubby!! Hugs & love your style!

JJMemaw

I loved every aspect of this story - Thank you !!

Loved this story! As Col. Hannibal Smith Said "I love it when a plan comes together."

I would also like to see you revisit these characters .

I loved this story I’m bisexual so I like how that was inclided in this story it was just really good

at least a couple of things took away from the realism/plausibility of the plot. For one, it would have been much better if mom had been left out of this chapter. Mom needed to be a whole separate chapter/continuation with brother and sister.

And damn! With a virgin at least be a little gentle. Although it did not seem to be painful. Seems toward the end, the author was in a hurry or getting bored or tired. -bern1965(pending)

Come on, with all that sex neither girl got pregnant, or found out they had a STD???

I won't rehash all of the 122 comments on this story to date. I just want to let you know what I liked. I liked the story as a whole, including the sister figuring out his plan. I wondered about that after Andrea slipped up with her fuck buddy Eddie. I would have liked to see her boss and wife do a little bit more. Adding the mom at the end was a mistake especially as fast as it materialized. I think there could have been more story involved waking her up to her own unrealized incestuous feelings toward her son, and then including her into their group. I think dad would be more than happy to bone his daughter and her friend. The mom and dad and Auntie inclusions to there incestuous goings on should be multi- page chapters in themselves. I also think sex, incestuous or normal needs to be about love, not degradation and submission and domination. I understand how 'in the moment' language can devolve into 'dirty talk' and 'name calling', especially in a 'quickie' situation, but using defamatory names as a normal form of address is going overboard. Eh, what do I know, I just read 'em, you are the writer. I love your stories for the most part, not all, but most.

I would love to read more. How the Aunt gets turned out and someone gets knocked up

Needs more description, and I don't really buy the author's "writing from the bad boy's viewpoint'. It's more like some geek's bad fantasy of what it must be like to be a "bad boy" who gets laid all the time. I also don't think that it's "most guy's" fantasy to fuck their mom. Most guys don't even think that way about their sisters, but that's a lot more common than their mom.

I wish you went into more detail and made the scene longer when teir mom joined in

Re: Tits?

Hell, for once it was nice not to have some story going on and on over all the girls quadruple Z size tits, etc. I mean, unless they're hucows (now that was a hot, kinky fantasy story!) monster melons then only a passing reference is enough, lol!

Love the hell out of this story though! I don't know how many times I've read it over the years!

I've read this story for the 4. time. And i'ts still fascinating.

Rgds. vonLassen

Another really great brother/ sister story ruined by involving a parent out of nowhere at the end!

Great story in many respects except absolutely no discussion or description of the sisters or the friends or the moms tits. For some of us, tits are the greatest thing on earth and after having search the story a second time and finding no mention of tits, I was just wondering why

Silkstockingslover is my favorite erotica author! Her plots seem real, her characters well enough developed (both literature wise and physically) to seem real! I wish I had a family and harem of sluts when I was younger. Now I'll be happy just to turn my wife into the sub slut she claimed she wanted to be when we met!

Nd6_bd

my experience is a little different as it was me that was the target... It was me that was in the shower or toilet and being watched. I was always undressed when either of them would burst into the bathroom wearing just an open robe.

I was the youngest and perhaps a little naïve I often saw my mother naked around the house and my Sister always seemed to be half undressed and left little to my imagination.

Several time my sister caught me playing with my cock and took over till I cum. She had then told my Mom.. My Mom counselled me about playing with my cock on my own and told me that from then on that she and my older sister would take care of me and that I had to obey them and do as they asked. I was there sex slave for a long time till I managed to move on.

Hmmm great story well written... shame my son doesn't have a sister , please please add more chapters of mother and son. No sister but he has his mother, he will enjoy this story I'm sure.

Another Chapter please

We need a pt 2 and 3. This is so fucking hot

Such a hot story So fucking hot

I always wanted to fuck my mother and sister just like in the story now I'm so horny my cock is throbbing waiting to be stroked and receive the attention that was just instilled in me....that was very sexy and beautiful at the same time⤵

We need a pt 2 and 3. This is so fucking hot