All Comments on 'Taking Pictures'

Congrats on publishing. Hope it’s well-received 😊. Em

Nice job! I don't usually spend time with Romance here on Lit, but you kept me engaged until the end.

Excellent sweet romance. Thank you.

I recall talking about the original version of this story and I must sat, you really took the criticism to heart and reworked this into a much better version. Kudos my friend, keep up the good work.

Interesting story!

5

Very enjoyable read. 5*...

A good romantic tale of jealousy, rejection and new love. A happy ending for the good guys and hate for the odd woman out.

How sad! Kelly pimping out her actual bro. Sure the first time was free but Amanda had to pay for the follow up. But the story was well written. Hope his services are free from here on in. 5 stars

The story is well written. I just don't think a guy should be with a girl who was the college bicycle and shows her body to guys online for money. Next she'll have an OF account and he gets to film her fucking other guys.

Romance ? - Not really !

Good plot, unfortunately not very convincingly realized, there would have been more in it : Too much sex too fast ! It's a pity !

2/5 stars from me.

Just once I'd like to read a story on here where the MC isn't some malleable wimp who gets led around like a scared puppy by the women in his life. I know it's just blind virtue signaling but it's just absurd. Also, this was very predictable.

Just read this and enjoyed it. Thx, Dave & Emily. ;)