All Comments on 'Tale of Obsession: Courting Daphne Ch. 01'

Oooh I like it.

Can't wait for part two!

i adore this story so far, cant wait for more! jacinta xx

Can't wait to see what happens next. Hurry

Thank you for your comments. :) I'll try to finish the second installment as soon as my life is in order again. xD I'm not promising that it will be "really soon", but I promise it will be there. :)

Again, thanks!

Really enjoyed your story, can't wait for the next chapter.

Will be interesting to see what makes Leander the mixture he seems to be. You write a good story!

That was amazing........don't normally like a lot of story and not much raunchy sex LOL but I could not stop reading. Good job!!

I really like how you are telling a story but one thing that got me was that as I reading and enjoy it, the word "cunt" and "clit" just took me out of the environment - it went from being erotic to me. I like your style of writing and that it's not overall crude but this is one thing that I would mention, because it takes me out of the fantasy world you've created into modern times. In any case, I'm enjoying your story so far!

I really do love this story, I'm an avid reader, mostly fantasy, and I usually only read this type of stuff to get me off, but wow it was like the best of both worlds and there hasn't been any real sex yet. I can't wait to read more :D

Good one .

A wonderful opening... even with the portent horror imbedded

What a wonderful beginning!

Intense, but a great start to what I hope will will an interesting story! Thank you

Love it! Excited to read the rest!!!