All Comments on 'Tale of Three Sisters Ch. 01'

A decent start to this story. Hoping that you write more!

More please?

Need more to fill out the story

A decent start to what could be a really good series, but the first chapter was a little short. You could have had Florence inspecting her sister’s dick, maybe giving her a handjob, before the end.

I do like futa themed stories and I’m glad you emphasised the fact that Maxine had a fully functioning pussy as well as her 10 inch cock.

I hope you just stick with Maxine and Florence in chapter 2, and keep Beatrix out of the story till part 3.

It’s a very good premise and shows the emotion well. The run-on sentences make it difficult to read. Using one of the volunteer editors can make your good story into an excellent one. Thanks for writing and sharing it with us.

Good start here, was disappointed at it being one page.