All Comments on 'Tale of Two Panties Ch. 02'

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jenorma2012jenorma2012about 6 years ago
ok

Busted by mom, I wonder what kind of excuse she will come up with that her mom will believe we will see

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Caught

Any chance of how far this could go, mom talks to the girls about it , and who knows tells the other mom, you take it from here

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
quite sweet

Love the many references to how woman-to-woman sex smells, tastes and sounds! If you've never tried it -- take the chance. You know you want to.

lovethosepantieslovethosepantiesabout 6 years ago
This Story has a long way to go?

Threesome, Foursome? Keep it going, this story has plenty of room for further development. love it keep going!

Danno_61455Danno_61455about 6 years ago
SOMEHOW THIS WAS A LET DOWN

You had an audience to perform to and now they may not follow on. Where is the drama and seduction?

Maybe write it, and like the fourth grade teacher say's, let the work set and then read it and extending character interaction with descriptive situation imagery.

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenabout 6 years ago
Good follow-on chapter

I enjoyed the follow-on to the first chapter, and am looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you for sharing this with us!

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