by suzi86
Brilliant. Your best so far, in my opinion, and if I could give it 6 stars I would.
I love the flirting, the build up, the insecurity and the finale. All in all, Dana and Gilda are wonderful creations and you should be proud.
Anna
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There is a truth behind your story. This is often how affairs really evolve. You have captured it perfectly. You made us, the readers, wait for the moment, just as much as you made Dana and Gilda wait. A refreshing telling.
So well written. Thank you for gentle, loving sex from a woman's point of view.