by Tess_Stevens
It would be a diservice to your readers to not continue with your story. The story line seems well thought out and moves at an even pace. What a pleasure it is to read an entry without glaring errors! Kudos to you both! Can't wait for the next installment.
you really must cotinue, well thought out plot well written dialogue, a joy to read
I guess that doesn't include checking for typos or bad dialogue. You should probably include that, too.
That was a great story that you wrote. I like how you were able to get back at the mother's control issues with father and daughter having control of mother after which he had done to them. I can hardly wait for the next chapter to see the father take the daughter's virginity.
My god, what a hot, hot story. I damn near got a nut just reading this story. It would be a crime if you don't continue it.
Please continue with this wholly absorbing work. I think you have been very successful in establishing your characters, and for me, they really live. Your plot works for me and I am certain genuine suspension of disbelief will make this a thoroughly enjoyable story for your readers.
This aside, my continued mental health depends entirely on knowing the rest of the story. You must not stop now.
Thank you for your excellent effort.
Rodan
You also mixed in denial, arousal , imprisionment and isolation of 'the box' , Nice.
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Are you writing a sequel to this story?? I really would like one where the dad takes her cherry
This is the best written story I have ever read. There's no rush into intercourse etc just like real incest families. Well done
I've never read anything quite so hot. I do hope you intend giving us another chapter.
If she gets horny enough she might inspire her husband to start doing anal with her.
Or, if her husband has always wanted to do that he might go to the dark side and use the shocker to force her to submit. Sorry.