All Comments on 'Tales of Reluctance: Tale 01'

i liked your story but i am not sure if it made sense to me because i think that the story is about mark and kate having an affair but sometimes there is written pajl in there ??? i am not sure but it just confused me

The neighbor and husband switched names halfway through. Ruined an otherwise good story. That's kind of a HUGE mistake to make.

Guys I am sorry if there are any errors in text will resubmit edited version later today

That there is a part 2 where we find out that Paul is not the idiot with computer equipment that he let everyone believe.

I did post an edited version on Sunday 21st June but it's still on pending so sorry for the delay in removing my mistakes

As a result3 stars. Could have been better. And why would the creator of a tech company NOT set up his own computer using his own techs? Why would he trust some guy he just met with access to his personal computer?

On second thought, one star. Because she said earlier she hadn't access to their money thatPaul controlled it all.

very hot story dear, well written. I liked that there was respect between them and sex precaution.

A very well written story great sex, but it ended with me feeling empty. Sorry I am an old romantic and I hate evil triumphing over good.