Tales of the Change: The Seductress

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"WELL DONE, CHILDREN. VERY WELL DONE."

Then it was gone.

"What the hell was that?" stammered Edward.

Olivia's eyes were wide, the white showing. "I think," she said, "that our friends just paid us a visit, and that they approve of what just happened." She swallowed through a throat suddenly gone dry.

"Well," Edward said, hugging her close, "I agree with it on that score at least." He gave a small laugh.

"Tell me, Seductress. Who should we try to heal next?"

She smiled slyly and ran her hands over his sweet hard body, groaning as her gift rose up in her once more.

"What do you think of punk rock chicks who don't want to put out? With blue hair?"

The End?

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LovesDancingLovesDancing4 months ago

Interesting story plot, thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Parts of this I loved, parts of it just felt like incel-lite.

Glaze72Glaze72over 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks to those of you who are enjoying this story. I intend to post the second chapter in the near future. But if you would like to get a sneak peek, hop on over to AlanaChurch.com, where you can purchase this book, the sequel, and quite a lot more!

Comentarista82Comentarista82over 2 years ago

Loved this very original idea with some of the more comical monikers. I loved you getting these two together and as other posters said, "is ripe for a novel" development for sure. Will you consider it? Just a great balance in every sense of the word.

magic_knirfmagic_knirfover 2 years ago

Clever plot, well written. Marvellous read!

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