All Comments on 'Talitha'

by ny_girl14

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brfinestbrfinestover 16 years ago
A nice start

Nicely written. Having done the same thing myself, changing plans when a masturbation opportunity presents its self. The 14 in your name did give me some pause, and very nasty images in my mind.haha I can see this story going a long way. Dildos, vibrators and toys can be fun, but nothing quite as exciting as a boy with a hard cock, as long as he has experience and caring. Good luck and keep writting, you are good at it.

walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 16 years ago
Super great! Hurry with more!

Wonderful writing! Will the story continue? Please hurry with more! Great job!

undiscoveredloveundiscoveredloveover 16 years ago
hot!

this was definitely hot, hope to see a part two!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Wonderful ...

realistic ... great descriptive writing ... leto423

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
A Grand Beginning

A very sensitive, sensual, well written story. I look forward to the next in the series. One thought occurs to me. Had Talitha used the vibrator with two inches inserted she would have experienced a great deal of stimulation as the sensitive nerves as well as the g-spot are located in this area. A long cock is nice of course but a short, thick one is more effective for arousal and stimulation.

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