All Comments on 'Talking Balls'

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BJGoodheadBJGoodheadover 7 years ago
Ah hah

That was humor...and satire...and not too shabby.

SCM_AUTHORSCM_AUTHORover 7 years ago
Dialogue

Thought it was great. Got me going and I enjoyed the banter going on between the ladies. The only thing that put me off a little was that it wasn't always clear who was speaking. Nevertheless, Farah's fellatio photo will stick with me for some time to come.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
That photo

Two striking features: unlike most porn, it adopts a fly-on-the-wall perspective, and it relies mostly on dialogue. The talk is crisp and convincing. And, yes, I would love to see Farah with her face covered. I smiled and hardened as I read. More, please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I think this story is super fun. 5 stars. I love the ladies and their vibe. Check out my series featuring Central’s #1 MILF for similar ladies with similar attitudes and slutty tendencies!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great story. Please write more of these!!

Funny as hell!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

You should write up the Big Dicked Bastard sequel to this

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