by JukeboxEMCSA
The way Alicia falls in Ms Lassiter hands is absolute erotic! great story!
OMG that was so hot and erotic, with Holly and Alicia falling into lust for eachother and to think it was all planned by "the mistress"
Delicious, cunning little move by the Psych teacher making 2 pets in 1. Amazing mantras and those subtle cues just pop-up beneath the surface. Always love the little hints. Look forward to more -S
The induction process was so arousing...I could see myself doing the same as Alicia (what a wonderful thought...). I love the two-for-one idea. Again, the mantras were fantastic--you definitely have a knack for them. I would have been more interested to see a more gradual shift within Alicia...it seemed like she progressed rather quickly compared to her roommate who was actually having sessions with Dr. Lassiter. I love your use of asides during Alicia's conversation with her, showing that her struggles are merely superficial...fantastic job.
Even though I don't agree on the inductions I enjoyed the story. Good job!
Not normally into mind control, but this is "delicious horror" ! A great imaginative original story.
Wow! What a clever, clever story. Just a little sexuality inside the story but with a lot of implied sex-to-come. Delicious.