All Comments on 'Talking in Your Sleep'

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klausbrovklausbrovalmost 13 years ago
thank you!

The way Alicia falls in Ms Lassiter hands is absolute erotic! great story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
That was HOT

OMG that was so hot and erotic, with Holly and Alicia falling into lust for eachother and to think it was all planned by "the mistress"

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Unsung induction...

Delicious, cunning little move by the Psych teacher making 2 pets in 1. Amazing mantras and those subtle cues just pop-up beneath the surface. Always love the little hints. Look forward to more -S

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

that was SOO fucking hot..

MCAddictMCAddictover 11 years ago
Fantastic.

The induction process was so arousing...I could see myself doing the same as Alicia (what a wonderful thought...). I love the two-for-one idea. Again, the mantras were fantastic--you definitely have a knack for them. I would have been more interested to see a more gradual shift within Alicia...it seemed like she progressed rather quickly compared to her roommate who was actually having sessions with Dr. Lassiter. I love your use of asides during Alicia's conversation with her, showing that her struggles are merely superficial...fantastic job.

SecretDreamerSecretDreamerover 10 years ago
Hot!

Even though I don't agree on the inductions I enjoyed the story. Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
erotic !

Not normally into mind control, but this is "delicious horror" ! A great imaginative original story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Wow! What a clever, clever story. Just a little sexuality inside the story but with a lot of implied sex-to-come. Delicious.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This story gave me a sinking feeling , but other than that I’m cool ! Lol

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