by Ryan283
I love this story, usually I only scan bits and pieces, but I was locked to each word. I'm still a virgin and I hope that my first time is half as beautiful as that. You definitely have a talent for writing. I can't wait to see more of you work.
~Britt
wow... i was enthralled with every word you had written, i'm still a virgin and the exquisite way you described everything had me wanting to have sex even more...but i am going to try to hold out for that "tall dark and handsome" guy who will hopefully make everything as special as in your story. please keep writing.
thanks,
Gina ;)
This was a very nice story. All the intimate scene were very well written and I loved it. Just wondering how you can explain Alex knowing her name at the beginning if he wasn't her date? Would be a litle more realistic if they would have some kind of conversation before the movie starts. Otherwise this is a very nice story.
How did he know her name was Naomi if be wasn't even supposed to be her date he addresses her by her name the second he meets her