All Comments on 'Talla's Temple Ch. 04'

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Anonymousalmost 14 years ago

Good story please keep them coming

Great

Anonymousabout 13 years ago

Dry opinion

All the conspiracy and secret traditions of the Temple keeps me interested. The best thing for me though still is precision in characters description and mostly the intelligence of Talla. Thanks a bunch.

rightbank about 9 years ago

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The next chapters of "Two Hundred Dollars More" are up on the Patreon page for anyone subscribing to the $1 tier. https://www.patreon.com/xaviertorch I'm currently also working on the third novel in the Talla's Temple series. My first novel is Talla's Temple. I know, it co...

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