All Comments on 'Talla's Temple Ch. 12'

Interesting story line development, I'm still curious where it'll lead to. Please don't let this story get overly long, wrap up this 'book' before you reach, say, 30. You can always continue with a sequel.

Am I that ambitious?

I admit that this story is turning out to be a bit more than I thought it would be at first. To take it to the place I want it to go could be a while longer than I thought, so I've been thinking the same thing you are. Fortunately, there's a good spot to break it up so I can take a breather. Sort of an Ep. 5 thing, but without the hand amputation (I'm not *that* in to BDSM).

Thanks for the comment. I'm glad to hear from you.

Little action.