All Comments on 'Talla's Temple Ch. 13'

I check for new ones everyday - keep it up.

Sensitive and passionate. Thanks for writing, so often. Yet I hope you are still enjoying of creating it too and not letting it become a burden.

Your metaphors and similes were(are) very good.

Excellent character development, but my poor head is getting crowded. You might want to do a character list/glossary for those of us approaching senior status?