All Comments on 'Talla's Temple Ch. 18'

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Kolrin about 13 years ago

Nice one

I like how you increased the complications with their mesh. Are they by any chance siblings? Both of them Goddess born? Would be interesting to find out. Hope you can give us more soon!

Anonymousabout 13 years ago

Dry opinion

Can't wait for them to meet again.

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The next chapters of "Two Hundred Dollars More" are up on the Patreon page for anyone subscribing to the $1 tier. https://www.patreon.com/xaviertorch I'm currently also working on the third novel in the Talla's Temple series. My first novel is Talla's Temple. I know, it co...

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