On page two "Miksa couldn't bare it." She could, she probably was naked. Likely you meant she couldn't bear it. Two hours of community service writing another chapter.
The next chapters of "Two Hundred Dollars More" are up on the Patreon page for anyone subscribing to the $1 tier. https://www.patreon.com/xaviertorch I'm currently also working on the third novel in the Talla's Temple series. My first novel is Talla's Temple. I know, it co...