All Comments on 'Taming an Immortal Ch. 10'

I have enjoyed the series. Keep them coming.

If the fertilized egg was just implanted, why would there be a heartbeat? Anyhoo, very nice chapter. No sex, but the writing and baby surprise was fantab

Okie I'll iron that out in the next chapter! But here I did say it has gotten stronger by ten fold. It's like a gestating whale! I mean seriously how does a tiny egg become a tonne in just 11 months? You get the idea.

Please don't let Etienne marry zahara. He and Rose are meant to be together let them somehow find a way to be together with their baby.

This was a great chapter. I'd love to see her not be banished and they actually become mates

Keep them coming! Look everyday for the next! My only request, and yes I'm old, post names and who they are so I can look them up. I know the 2 main characters but get lost at times. Hell, I wake at times wishing I remembered my own name! Just teasing, lol

after reading this amazing chapter I thought how much of a kicker it would be if the child ended up actually being a pure blood somehow and Etine is just being stupid. But either way he belongs with Rose and if his bastard of an uncle an see that then so can he eventually.

How utterly pompous is Etienne? He is not his father and surely Rose is nothing like his mother. On that note, what's up with the Ancient, he seems to know what Etienne's uncle is up to but is apparently reluctant to stop it. Its soon time for both his mother and uncle to get what is due to them. Isn't marrying your cousin still wrong/weird no matter the species? Anyway, i love your story line and look forward to the surprises et al.

PS: your last submission was awesome too. Will make it a habitat to tell you and not just vote. But don't expect this type of long comment all the time. This is without a doubt my longest ever.

When will you publish the next story? Please I'm dying here lol :) good job ArtForm!

... Wonder Tale, told by a gifted bard. Thank you very much!

I hope the HEA is coming soon.

Can't wait for the next update!

Great chapter!!!! Can't wait for the next one!!!

He's an ass!

No more team Etienne!

I wholeheartedly agree with the last comment. Etienne is a total ass. I mean he's a totally badass character but he's still an ass.

I fucking hate babies. They make a noise and can't keep curfew. And complicate things. People should be born big - like, materialize or something. Then one can just tell it to go away like the problem it is, as you don't know it, it doesn't know you and there'll be no problem, since it'll be of a reasoning age.

Thanks for the sweet story.

Ps I hope Ettiene falls off of his dragon while crossing an active volcano.