All Comments on 'Tammy Jones'

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Great little story with an awesome sense of humor. 5 stars today and I will be watching for more from this author.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

That was the sweetest thing I have ever read on this site. I just loved the characterizations of our main players. Teddy will never betray this woman. She seems to have achieved her lifelong aspirations. I would love to see more stories like this instead of the sick cuck shit that dominates.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Good story but confusing. I thought they were in England then that they were two English people in the States then... well I don't know. But I always appreciate some humor in a romance story so "good on ya".

LudvigBlomSELudvigBlomSE9 months ago

A lovely story with humour, what more can one ask for? I really enjoyed it. Thank You!!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Bingo! Sweet funny tale, which I actually found believable! Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Cute and fun to read.

THANK YOU for your story.

Davester37Davester379 months ago

I really enjoyed this story. You write with a wonderful sense of humor. Your careful editing is also much appreciated. Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

muskyboymuskyboy9 months ago

Nice save at the end, turning a below average romance story into a pretty good one.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bc9 months ago

Waaay too much narrative. Otherwise, entertaining with good plot structure. 3.6*

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

No, it is not "too much narrative"! It is what a good story should be: Entertaining (much more so than many stories on this site), funny, and well told. And with such a nice plot at the end. Keep going!

JuanTwoNoJuanTwoNo9 months ago

VERY entertaining! Even LOL for real and not just letters in a comment entertaining! 5.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Very well done and enjoyable.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy9 months ago

Worked out okay in the end!

5

quandomquandom6 months ago

Nice story, well told, with very relatable characters. So- well written!

Broughton7Broughton73 months ago

Could do with editing perhaps but it reads well and who doesn't like a happy ending?

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Good one, boy meets girl, boy loses girl, boy gets girl back. Liked the humour though.

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