by chemist2023
Great little story with an awesome sense of humor. 5 stars today and I will be watching for more from this author.
That was the sweetest thing I have ever read on this site. I just loved the characterizations of our main players. Teddy will never betray this woman. She seems to have achieved her lifelong aspirations. I would love to see more stories like this instead of the sick cuck shit that dominates.
Good story but confusing. I thought they were in England then that they were two English people in the States then... well I don't know. But I always appreciate some humor in a romance story so "good on ya".
A lovely story with humour, what more can one ask for? I really enjoyed it. Thank You!!
I really enjoyed this story. You write with a wonderful sense of humor. Your careful editing is also much appreciated. Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.
Nice save at the end, turning a below average romance story into a pretty good one.
Waaay too much narrative. Otherwise, entertaining with good plot structure. 3.6*
No, it is not "too much narrative"! It is what a good story should be: Entertaining (much more so than many stories on this site), funny, and well told. And with such a nice plot at the end. Keep going!
VERY entertaining! Even LOL for real and not just letters in a comment entertaining! 5.
Could do with editing perhaps but it reads well and who doesn't like a happy ending?
Good one, boy meets girl, boy loses girl, boy gets girl back. Liked the humour though.