by Nikkiejanes
For once I was able to take a step back and see this as “just a story”. Normally I can’t, it’s not that I don’t see the events of a story as a fantasy it’s that I can’t see it that way.
I always find myself empathising with the main female lead, good stories are meant to evoke feelings in the reader. Had this been a clear case of non consent I would have found it revolting. Obviously parts of it involved reluctance on her part but there’s a world of difference between the two.
It’s a well written story it could easily have been extended to a multi chapter series. Despite that it was well balanced and believable. I’ve never liked the MC culture largely due to all the hypocrisy and sexism. If anything the hypocrisy is worse amongst MC culture than in mainstream society, demand all the females become sluts but don’t have a relationship with them because they’re sluts. A male prospect wouldn’t be told to ‘pull a train’ or serve the female members of the club.
We live in such a fucked up world.
Tess (UK)
“Devonian accent”?? I found the story to be overly long and boring. It was supposed to be a stroke story, but the sex wasn’t detailed, it didn’t give me an erection. Panther fan.