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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good start!

I look forward to seeing your story progress!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
looks good so far

Great start... keep em coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Here are some tips

Good story so far.

Here is some stuff to help you out

http://storiesonline.net/article/Fifteen_Steps_to_a_Dramatic_Plot

DarktezzaDarktezzaabout 10 years ago
More!

Awesome beginning! Please continue the story

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