by Tanya93
An interesting tale.
The story has a brilliant idea and has been beautifully executed, one error with the spelling the past tense of freeze is froze, not freezed.
Congratulations on a great story especially as English appears not to be your first language.
Just come across your stories. I really enjoyed your description of the chastisements in this story. As an Englishman,I didn’t know all the words you used to describe the garments of the various characters. That did not spoil my enjoyment of the story. I admired the way that the punishments were varied, I will definitely be reading more of your stories. Thank you for the pleasure your story provided.