All Comments on 'Tara's Game'

Absolutely LOVED this story. More like it please!

At least as good as Your

previous stories.

I usually quit reading a story as soon as I realize it's about aliens or animal creatures, but somehow, this one hooked me and I read it to the end. A bit tedious and repetitive at times, but nonetheless kept my attention. Of course the "gift" was a foregone conclusion but your descriptions of the chastity device, and of Cinder's reaction to finding it upon awakening were spot on. Well done, VerySpecificFetish.

Great to see that you're still active. I love your stories and it's an especially nice surprise that we're getting more works in the universe of The Maiden's Guard. The supernatural elements do a great job in enhancing the experience and I hope to read more from you in the future!

This was just the suffering I was looking for, gentle and very Sapphic. Love the female orgasm denial and quite preferred that it was nonconsensual. Would love to read more stories like this one. What a gem!

Hmm, lying, deceiving, lure through temptation, making contracts with unspecified consquences, what's the difference between an angel and a demon again? Now I'm curious what demon culture is like in this world

Oh what a devilish story we weave, when an angel practices to deceive!

I felt sympathy for Cinder, I really did. A wonderful story, you should be proud.