All Comments on 'Tarton Ch. 01'

Excellent story; I'm eager for Chapter 2! I like the dynamic building up between Cynthia and Sylvia, even if it's yet to happen. I also love the way you build up Sylvia's complicated personality, so we get to know her, It's cruel world out there. I wonder if the American Express guide will include Tarton in its next edition? 5* Your fan, JB

Brilliant start to this story. It's got all the right ingredients in it to make a superb 'coming of age' type of tale for Cynthia. You excel at such stories, I'm looking forward to seeing how this one unfolds. No doubt Cynthia will take young Simon in hand (literally) and teach him how to fuck, or maybe he'll be the one doing the teaching! We'll see!

5 Stars of course.

I dried up while reading, stayed dry, kept reading. Screw ghosts, this is the kind of horror that actually scares me.