All Comments on 'Tash and Torc Pt. 02'

I liked chapter 2. I liked that the story is first and the sex is part of it. I like the way you move the characters along and bring them together. Keep up the good work and thanks for your time and imagination.

You delievred and delivered good. It's so refreshing to read a story where a girl serves both as the narrator and the one taking initiative at the same time. Torc slowly warming up to her as a partner holds great potential but I suspect he hid his true feelings for her maybe even longer than she did for him. In any case I gave you another 5 and hope that the next one isn't far off.

More please

Chapter 2 of Tash and Torc cannot be understood without first reading chapter 1. That said, this is great romantic story telling, although it is regrettably too brief. The conclusion to this chapter fairly begs for another (and much-needed) chapter. Five stars.