All Comments on 'Tasmin and the Djinn'

by gypsygrrl

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SwedeqSwedeqover 16 years ago
Done......

Done, Done and.......Done. Excellent read. You might want to edit more or have a friend read your writings before posting them. Re-read this and you'll see what I mean.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

I liked it! ;-)

magus1011magus1011over 16 years ago
Excellent story.

Please get an editor or someone to help with your spelling and grammar. The premise, plot and character development are very good.

sweetfatimasweetfatimaalmost 16 years ago
good

it was so sweet i liked it a lot i dont care about the grammar i didnt notice anything

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Wondrous

that's beautiful. downright wondrous! i would love it if you would create a prequel of this so i could read more or create a sequel where we get to meet other djinn. i would love it if you would!!! this is beautiful!! worthy of the hall of fame!!!

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxover 12 years ago
would comment...but

Keyboard has too much water from my tears...Damn my eyes!

disableddandisableddanalmost 10 years ago
Well Written

I like the way you've written this.... nothing blatant, but just enough left to the imagination to bring a sense of wonder.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I am loving this story... Its like an adult fairytale...

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