by gypsygrrl
Done, Done and.......Done. Excellent read. You might want to edit more or have a friend read your writings before posting them. Re-read this and you'll see what I mean.
Please get an editor or someone to help with your spelling and grammar. The premise, plot and character development are very good.
it was so sweet i liked it a lot i dont care about the grammar i didnt notice anything
that's beautiful. downright wondrous! i would love it if you would create a prequel of this so i could read more or create a sequel where we get to meet other djinn. i would love it if you would!!! this is beautiful!! worthy of the hall of fame!!!
Keyboard has too much water from my tears...Damn my eyes!
I like the way you've written this.... nothing blatant, but just enough left to the imagination to bring a sense of wonder.