All Comments on 'Taste of Mom'

Comments are to be taken lightly, don't let them stop you from finishing this story. If you quit now , they have beat you. It was a good read with a few errors . thanks

Learn proper writing, proofread what you've written then try again.

great story, well written, good build up.

I liked it a lot, but there needed to be more adjectives. Like wet, tight, & big. Also she should call her son by his name. Not "son" Other than that it was a good story.

i got my step mom knocked up she had child dad is so stupid he works all day i work on her were toghter all the time i get jealous when he fucks her

It seems obvious English is not your first language - and that's fine, but you need an editor. This was an 'OK' story that could have been exceptional with the help of a good editor.

Great story - started slow - then went into fast mode.

Mom and son got it on a little to soon after a slow start and easy first contact together.

Would have given a 100% if sex had been drawn out into another chapter.

Great reading.