by monicablu
Exquisite! You need to write more stories, your style, directness, sweetness and descriptions are perfect. With your short story you have taught me a thing or two. Thank you.
Monica, your comment on one of my stories prompted me to make a visit yours. This is perhaps the first story I've ever read in this genre. I like your style, girl! Like the other comments, I'll say, "Continue writing!" You have a Texas style all your own.
Really erotic story, well written. Great attention to details and characterization. My favorite part was: "Then I thought of a nice idea, from something I've seen a few years ago on the internet. I started thickly soaping up my breasts and tummy, and then used my my body to rub up against and clean her, like a human washcloth. This elicited several moans from Staci, and my breathing became more ragged as I worked my boobs up and down, and in circles, on her back while holding and squeezing her breasts. I then started to squat down and rub them all over her nice tight butt, nipples finding their way up and down the crease between her cheeks as I held her hips. And, I did literally kiss her ass while I worked cleaning her legs."
Keep up the great work, you are talented.
Almost makes me miss being in the South. I enjoyed the story. Very sensual.
Hallo monicablu!
A very well written, hot and sexy story, my panties were soaking wet long before the end of the story,,, YES!
I don't know if your writing, or planning to write a "Tastes Like Strawberries, Chapter-2".... But if you do, I would very much love to read it..
5-Stars and 5- Wet Orgasms!.... Thank-you, for sharing your lovely story!
Gay Kat.
Loved this hot sexy story, as a male who loves bi women I would just love to get it on with these two sexy lovelies. Sex crazed cunt lapping fucker, Lancashire, UK.