All Comments on 'TattleTale Sister'

you have a lot of development in writing to work on. like horny teenager who goes too fast once he sees boobs

Excellent concept, poorly executed. I heartily agree with the previous comment that you rushed through this. Just about as satisfying as premature ejaculation. You got something out of it because it was published. I feel unsatisfied.

I thought you should added the tattletale threat