All Comments on 'Teach Me Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

gotta get rid of the loser husband and keep them as a couple maybe even after school.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Very good but you need an editor and to check your spelling.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Nice concept...

Nice concept, but very poorly written. I concur - author needs an editor.

caseykeller2001caseykeller2001about 12 years ago

All i can say is...i am ready for the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
goood

hope the next chapter is good as the first keep it going

Paxo1944Paxo1944almost 12 years ago
One tease of a teacher

Oh to be taught by a teacher like that. I had a very sexy Biology teacher but fantasy was all I had. look forward to future chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
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If he used a condom when they did anal then how did his cum string off her ass to the sheets?

You need to proofread, like your plot though.

auwingerauwingerabout 7 years ago
Nice.

Very nice story of every high school guy's dream!

HangswellHangswell9 months ago

This one just didn't match the the others that I have read of yours, I hope the next one improves.

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