by Soma99
I hope for a second part with sexy clothes, stockings, garter, very high heels, leash, collar, plug... and more humiliation in school.
Well done !
I look forward to hearing more of this teacher's debasement and humiliation. I would add the tag 'cuckquean' for this story. Many cuckqueans will find the scene with Brittany incredibly hot.
Please also keep things realistic. I like that you've pushed the danger zone of risk, but don't seem keen to push anything completely unrealistic like relying on teenagers of being able to keep huge secrets or gangbangs in the bathroom or forcing her to do outrageous things (like completely take off her clothes while at her desk but "behind a book") in her classroom and the students all be completely oblivious. Keep things plausible and you'll have a continued reader in me.
When I started reading I thought, "oh no, not another girl getting blackmailed into to doing super extreme things to avoid people finding out she did something really minor." I was totally surprised, and very impressed by the reverse blackmail angle. And her humiliation by Brittany was awesome. Keep up the good work!
Such a pleasure, how immensely much more erotic it is to read an author who bothers with nuance, with the real fear and vulnerability of handing over one's genital horsey reigns to another. So to speak. The school dude, humor, just enough
meanness and just enough kindness. And her poor thing - but lucky thing. Actual conflict it's just so nice to get her insecurity about her ass, but then over-cum it. Ba dum dum
Top to toe a winner!
Penwithink
The depths she will go to please him, but really to please her own desires. I love how far the author took it and left us wanting more. Great job!!!
This is good, I like that she isn't blackmailed, that she submits on her own. I can see lots of fun happening in part 2 of the story with Callum. Keep up the good writing.
From a guy in IT that's as brilliant.. . Love the time you take to build the story and the naughty stuff is just so so hot.. ..
Ps I came twice ;)
I love the fact that she was desperate to please Pierce, but in doing so she also pleased herself. You left me wanting more. Much more
Love the manipulation used in this one!! My favorite story on Lit thus far!! Great work!!
Soma is a good storyteller. The author seems to understand how some people crave to submit and how being humiliated can be a big turn on. Perhaps some of you find it hard to believe, but I can tell you I have known several women who were very close to what our heroine is. Very Hot! That said, some of the writing is sloppy. The name switched back and forth from Melissa to Michelle. Also, there were some typos. Both made for distractions.
Bored Teacher & bored reader. so wordy hard to continue reading - get on with it already