by busrider
Have someone check your spelling, it only takes a minute. It is called "Proof Reading" before submitting your story, and you will not get comments like the one I read. Some people think that they never make a mistake, but I am sure they did when they just started out. Try again, and use someone else to read and correct errors in the story.
NOT BAD FOR A FIRST START. NOW YOU SEE THE ERROR ABOUT THE SPELLING. THE MOST IMPORTANT THING IS YOU WROTE THE STORY, AND IT WAS GOOD, SOMEWHAT BELIEVEABLE. NOW SHOW YOUR READERS THAT YOU CAN WRITE ANOTHER AND GET A PROOFREADER THIS TIME, TO HELP THOSE WHO DEMAND PERFECTION.
as long as he didnt get emotionally involved. i would be delighted if a teacher fucked my son. its better than knocking up another 14 or 15 year old. i say we need miore horny female teachers. now a male teacher fucking my daughter, ill kill the pervert!
Your story was written well. You have some talent. Explore it more. And get someone to spell check your work, or do it on a word processor and have it spell check it for you. (To the person who was laughing, You're an asshole!