by AverageBear
GREAT follow-up to the first chapter. I love the "chemistry" between them. Loving couple, a little kinky but not over the top. The dialogue is great - love the humour. And VERY hot sex!!! Can't wait for Ch. 03!
You give your characters real emotions and lusts, don't write anything physically impossible and show a caring side of them. Well done!
Oh, how I loved this! They experienced something for the first time together. And, even when an awkward moment hit one of them, the other was so supportive and brought the unabashed love and humor.