by lovelyandsad
I loved it! The writing was smooth, and I also liked your subtle approach to describing an interracial relationship. Hope you find time to continue this story!
This is a lovely story, that is realistic, romantic, and sexy. Thanks for writing it and sharing it with us.
Appears to be a “one off” despite last line, which would be a shame — you number your chapters in the series you write. This short whimsical piece is a lot of fun to read; the characters you created come across as real, easily visualized. Loved the school conference scene when Ms. DeWitt sets ex straight, the mango scene in the grocery is delightful and the bedroom scene, while not particularly erotic, works well for both storyline and characters. As a near hopeless romantic would enjoy seeing you develop and relax this relationship — even bring in the kids. Ms DeWitt would be a fun/engaging wake-up call for Georgia’s kids. 5 stars.
I believe this is the first of your stories I have read and enjoyed it. Great storytelling and good characters so looking forward to more chapters and adventures for the teachers pet. I think she will make a good obedient one. Cheers
Good start of a possible good story. You can actually see each scene as it played out in your mind. I love how Georgia continuously brings life into fight her desires. Also like how she never wavers from calling the teacher Ms. Dewitt, always showing the younger girl is IN charge. Waiting patiently for chapter 2.
Pappasleaze!
Thanks to everyone who has commented. I do intend to continue this story, so stay tuned!
This story has legs. How much longer do we, your loyal and devoted readers, have to wait?
Update please?
Anytime now?
Ah, come on!
I'm actually looking for a collaborator to help me move forward with this story. If there are any smut writers who identify as black or mixed race who might be interested in writing alternating chapters with me, reach out.