All Comments on 'Teacher's Pet'

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JoliennJoliennover 1 year ago

I loved it! The writing was smooth, and I also liked your subtle approach to describing an interracial relationship. Hope you find time to continue this story!

AliceGeeAliceGeeover 1 year ago

I just loved it, not much more to say but well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is a lovely story, that is realistic, romantic, and sexy. Thanks for writing it and sharing it with us.

MigbirdMigbirdover 1 year ago

Appears to be a “one off” despite last line, which would be a shame — you number your chapters in the series you write. This short whimsical piece is a lot of fun to read; the characters you created come across as real, easily visualized. Loved the school conference scene when Ms. DeWitt sets ex straight, the mango scene in the grocery is delightful and the bedroom scene, while not particularly erotic, works well for both storyline and characters. As a near hopeless romantic would enjoy seeing you develop and relax this relationship — even bring in the kids. Ms DeWitt would be a fun/engaging wake-up call for Georgia’s kids. 5 stars.

Qwer12Qwer12over 1 year ago
Very Well Done and Entertaining

I believe this is the first of your stories I have read and enjoyed it. Great storytelling and good characters so looking forward to more chapters and adventures for the teachers pet. I think she will make a good obedient one. Cheers

MICHAELG1963MICHAELG1963over 1 year ago

An incredible first chapter, sure hope this continues for many more

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Looking good already, can’t wait to see how this d/s relationship unfolds…

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good start of a possible good story. You can actually see each scene as it played out in your mind. I love how Georgia continuously brings life into fight her desires. Also like how she never wavers from calling the teacher Ms. Dewitt, always showing the younger girl is IN charge. Waiting patiently for chapter 2.

Pappasleaze!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Delicious. More pleae.

lovelyandsadlovelyandsadover 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks to everyone who has commented. I do intend to continue this story, so stay tuned!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

This story has legs. How much longer do we, your loyal and devoted readers, have to wait?

Update please?

Anytime now?

Ah, come on!

lovelyandsadlovelyandsad12 months agoAuthor

I'm actually looking for a collaborator to help me move forward with this story. If there are any smut writers who identify as black or mixed race who might be interested in writing alternating chapters with me, reach out.

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