All Comments on 'Teachers Pet Ch. 01'

Extremely intrigued! Great story and want to see as much of it as possible!

That was a good start. Interested to see where it goes from here.

Both Rachel and her roommate at the same school?

The possibilities are endless. not only will Rachel and Luke hook-up again.

I can see Luke and Tina and possibly all three of them hooking up.

Great first story and keep up the work.

5 Stars.

VERY good start.

Please see about getting an editor, as you has some grammar mistakes.

I'm looking forward to the next installment!

Seems the author is not the only one with grammar problems!

One of the better stories I’ve read on here recently. I hope you choose to continue writing it. It has a lot of potential.

Anxiously awaiting Chapter 2 and the rest of the story.

Hope Luke and Rachel turn out to have a long term relationship, but wouldn't mind seeing a threesome between them and Tina too.

Looking forward to reading more!!

People who walk around with a chip on their shoulders will usually find someone to knock it off. Luke's got an unwise mouth on him that sounds a lot like the football jocks he disparages. Makes him a less sympathetic character. Was that your intention? Hero vs. anit-hero?

Despite the troubles I have noted above, the story has promise.

Where all the cocks are huge, all the pussies squirt and everyone always cums simultaneously!

Aside from these trite tropes, the story shows promise. Just stay away from those incredibly boring jock/cheerleader/nerd stereotypes. Endeavor to improve the genre.

looking forward to the impending awkwardness of english class

Your opening statement really helped, with nothing. No idea who your identities are, so having characters look like them is no help. In future give an indication who you are talking about. Silly starts turn off readers.

The trope was familiar. The rhythm and flow was good. Not too rushed. The set up was better than most and the payoff was cute. But I will be expecting more and better from you. You show great promise. Looking for a 4.8 from you!

Good story, fairly good writing, good characters even if cliched. But where would writers be without cliches.

Looking forward to the fireworks.

Please stay away from the jocks-not-jocks rivalry and angst, make it really worth!

Let's see where this goes....

Is he gonna have a harem? Guess we'll wait and see

Will there be more?

i dearly hope we get more chapters of this story soon.

Can’t wait to see more!

Love the story, really hot, great characters....but are you going to continue? The people want more! lol

Good start, well written, nice cliffhanger. Do hope you will continue and let us know how Luke gets out of this jam and into Rachel's bed again.

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You have to keep this one going. Very Hot!!!

I think a lot of folks would like to hear the next chapter, I'm definitely one. Good story. Please do continue it!

Oh BigV, what an open slate you have to play with, a writers dream.... Does it go to blackmail or hidden love(s) or special tutoring or total back off due to the teacher-student no-no of society? Plus you could have alternate endings to each segment. BigV you got your hands full with this well developed story line as Part 1.

Will be most interesting to read how you continue develop it, and I hope you don't just go into detailed bump & grind crap. Remember often "less is more", keep your readers imagination active that the detailed minutia of the sex kills.

BTW, I do write under but under a different pen-name. Hooyah, salute, 6*.

This needs a part 2! But it has been a year since publishing, so it probably won't get one. But still!

please please write a part 2!

A very yummy start to this story! Thank you!

You need to not write any more until you get a teacher!

I stopped after "...the our yard", but then continued, & continued to find mistakes!!!

HOLY SHIT. This is both FANTASTIC masturbation material AND a FANTASTIC story. You really are a fantastic writer. Please write more on Literotica!!!!!!!!