by hunnyslutcatt
If only you could keep a tighter grip on your tenses, past to present then back again, you could be a really good writer. That small observation aside, a great erotic story that will prompt me to check out your other work.
A well written story with a gradual build up that paints a vivid picture and makes you horny for the action to begin ... but all in good time. You can picture the headmasters office, and the rule of law he can impose.
Great descriptive sex. Afirst class story. Can't wait for detention when he watches the girls check out if lesbian sex is a viable alternaive to man meat.
Cheers,
Menderman
I've read this story a few times and it never gets boring. Awesome work!