by Ben Nichols
A little more description on the lingerie (you mentioned stockings earlier, but never described them) would be great. Otherwise, a great story. How about a sequel?
WOW! what a great story. just the right amount of build up, hott action, control and submission. all with a very believable and realistic plot line.
I especially like the gift of the rain coat at the end. it provides the perfect opportunity for chapter two - perhaps he left a business card in the pocket or something so she could find him.
well done sir.