All Comments on 'Teaching Maxima'

hot story, a really good read please keep writing!

Well written, and I enjoyed it. I do think, however, that the story could have benefited by being about four times as long; the narrative compression needed to keep it this short meant that our narrator didn't get a chance to really set up his feelings with the reader, and comes across a little more like a 'creep' than I think you were going for.

Keep up the good work!