by Anabelle_W
I quit after the 13 Inch penis part. Up to that part the dialogue was EXTREMELY childish. Glad I gave up.
1 totally wasted star
DragonRider55
I would. Do not continue. Calling it Chapter 1 means you plan to. Just don't.
The author must be opening this themselves and continually giving it 5 stars , no way this preteen trash is a 3.5 star average.
You killed it with 13inch penis. There should have been some thought and reluctance before agreeing to the act of incest. Details and character development can make or break a story
Way too many holes I even got past the 13 inch lol. But when the oldest daughter contradicted herself I knew this was going downhill fast