All Comments on 'Teaching My Family Ch. 01'

by Anabelle_W

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Horrible

I quit after the 13 Inch penis part. Up to that part the dialogue was EXTREMELY childish. Glad I gave up.

1 totally wasted star

DragonRider55

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
If I could give this less than one star....

I would. Do not continue. Calling it Chapter 1 means you plan to. Just don't.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Score fixed

The author must be opening this themselves and continually giving it 5 stars , no way this preteen trash is a 3.5 star average.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Doomed from the start

You killed it with 13inch penis. There should have been some thought and reluctance before agreeing to the act of incest. Details and character development can make or break a story

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 5 years ago
I

think I would have to agree with everyone else this sucked

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Can I give a Zero Stars

Way too many holes I even got past the 13 inch lol. But when the oldest daughter contradicted herself I knew this was going downhill fast

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