All Comments on 'Teaching My Son Ch. 01'

REALLY GREAT WAY OF PUTTING THINGS THAT WERE DONE. REALLY SEXY STORY AND A NICE TO BE CONTINUED WNDING. YES THE AUTHER HAS ALOT TO SHARE WITH US . VERY GOOD. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

what happen to part 2 where he bang her.

please finsh

The proper use of the English language must have escaped you. When, and in this Century you find the words you need ,I'll read, and High Score you.

I loved it however maybe have someone proof read the test before you post. You had alot of typo's but not enought to wreck the story

It was a very good story, I'm hoping that you continye this string. Does she ever get the use of her arms, what happens if an when the maid walks in on one of there lessons?

Keep up the good work

got in the way of the story, I couldnt read it.

Maybe a Sequel?

likedit

Waiting for chapter 2. I am sure the games with the maid will be entertaining.

This story not satisfied me...

Worst story dont write anymore

A terrific opening story, and really natural too. Can't wait to read about their first full fuck and the games; hopefully with both of you and the maid.

That got me so fucking hot, please write more!

An excellent story, I really hope you continue this story. Mom needs to teach her son how to fuck her and how to be her perfect lover. Maybe even how to become a father...?

3 nice starts to 3 good story thanks , please send more soon!

This was terribly written. Do you know that in literature all numbers are to be spelled? Do you know that a sentence can not start with "? Do you know that to have quotations you have to be quoting someone; The girl screamed, "get off of me!" and in response you ran away like a little girl while crying, "mommy."

love the story line of a mother and son being so open about everything .

I like that he son now has to become a man and take care of his mother

but she is still his mother teaching him about sex and life.

It is easy to tell that English is not your first language. Your spelling is ok but the sentence structure and word choice is just so consistently wrong. For instance, in Western countries when we talk about having a bath, we mean in a bathtub, not a sponge bath in bed unless the person cannot get out of bed. I liked the idea for the story but it was just too hard to read. Stick to Hindi or Gujarati or whatever your language is.

I was disappointed that mom did not directly educate her son about the female piss flow.

I hope that you will incorporate the son's close up view of his mom pissing in the next chapter.

The best way to do that is to show them the hairy hole they came out of. Believe me, the boys will be attentive students. Mom spreads her thighs and lets her kid feast his eyes on what he's only dreamed and whacked off about--his own mother's cunt. She smiles and invites him to probe it with his fingers, he sticks one or two fingers inside and explores around. Now he's so hard his young cock is practically busting out of his pants, and they both figure that his cock is the perfect thing for him to explore and get to know his mother's cunt really well. Her baby boy's also got a pair of heavy hanging balls, filled to the brim with his creamy semen, and it's a scientific fact, proven by numerous studies, that a son's semen is ideal for coating and soothing his mother's needy twat. Researchers have established that such sperm injections should be applied at least once a day. Luckily, they report that with fit young males their balls never quit, so that the boys' moms get an endless supply of the stuff to fill their maternal twats to the brim.

Know when you mean no; fell vs feel, eyc. Basic mistakes that take away from good narrative.