by chris99999
Nice buildup and only cause I LOVE kissing I thought you should of put more detail of them doing that, but you are the author and I am not! It was very good though and my first read of you.
The table was not a good idea. Not romantic. Honestly once was all? Take her up to bed and use the next 45 minutes constructively.
i loved it and the virgin was great and so was Emma she loved it all Courtney got to enjoy it all so and ended up with child so i hope you keep writing more papa
He had a wasted climax in the story and reading said story gave me a wasted climax as well. You are a bad author.
This story was fantastic. I hope there's going to be a sequel where maybe there's an eventual 3 some, or the wife gets off on watching a brother and sister going at it. Maybe some bisexuality between the two women and the sister moves in with the couple for a long term blissful relationship with them. Good job.
Could have been great, but the deceit aspect was weird, completely unnecessary and takes away from the actual tension of the relationship between the siblings. Also really didn't like the random and very strange inclusion of various demeaning descriptions of physical sex components; Why mention that his sister's breasts would be saggy in a few years? Why have the sister say "only six inches"? Seriously, it's not sexy or hot to degrade someone's body so why? It really ruined the story completely and seemed so out of place.
OOO I LOVE THIS! SO GOOD! I loved how courtney became part of their roleplay in bed, I loved the dirty talk! I loved how he pushes two fingers up in her virgin pussy knowing he should've gone slow but he just couldn't help it, it shows his eagerness so deliciously! Same with him fucking her right then and there on the table! and I enjoyed how the wife was excited and aroused by the idea of brother and sister fucking rather than being opposed to it, or them doing it behind her back. PERFECT 10/10