All Comments on 'Teaching Sara Ch. 03'

"She'd had" isn't proper grammar. I know that most will call me a grammar Nazi. That's okay. If you think that it's proper (as a reader), then you need to go back to skool.

I agree that somebody does indeed need to go back to school. Not the author, however. The author's use of "She'd had" is perfectly correct and proper. It's called "past perfect tense". Look it up. You can start here: http://www.bbc.co.uk/worldservice/learningenglish/grammar/learnit/learnitv343.shtml.

Hope that helps :)

Great story, cant wait for more!

Her hymen was somewhere between 6 to 10 inches inside her vagina. Unheard of!!

That's a really thick cock btw. Honestly, with those exaggeration she might as well fuck a horse.

I wish there was more sex, but I like what was there. The build up was good. I like that you showed the conflict. This would be a great story to continue. Hope you write more.

Other than an obvious lack in knowledge of female anatomy and this I'm sure purely ficitional cock of her daddy's I thought the story wasn't half bad. The exaggeration and lack of knowledge of his daughters anatomy distracted from what could have been a really good story.

I agree with the naivety being unrealistic and as the size of his cock being unbelievable too. But I love the hugeness of his cock and how he kept pushing through her cervix. I haven't found many stories where a man had a cock that was thick, long and wide and forced it's way into the woman or women's' cervix-es. It turns me on so much to find stories in the genres that interest me with those elements. I wonder what comes next, because she was a virgin and there was no mention of birth control. I mean with how far his cock reaches without even trying, bare fucking, the huge amounts of cum he's producing and him and her's cervix fucking she should be insanely pregnant with like sextuplets!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I had to write a comment because I'm a little surprised at the critical ones here. THis story is AWESOME greeneyedvirgin. Hotter than hot. My fave for a looooong time. Love. It. Who cares if it's a bit unrealistic, it's a fantasy! Please keep writing more!!! Btw I would suggest you look at Sumddy if you haven't seen his stories yet. Love you! Thank you!

I don't like incest stories - however, this was incredibly hot! While some of the details - such as the location of the hymen (most girls nowadays, through tampon use, don't have one and if they did, it's about an inch in) and the size of the father's cock - gave me pause, it didn't detract from the story-telling. I would love to see what happens next.

Wooowwww....This story was cream-worthy! By the way.... anyone have a mop? Lol

This was amazing... Thanks dear.

That was...I'm just at a loss for words...

You should make a chapter 4!

There has to be a chapter 4, right? Your story is just too amazing to end here.

Great job!

Chapter 4 would be nice, but it's great like it is! All 5 star chapters :))

Amazing as always. You seriously need a chapter 4 for this

I was drawn to this story because of the author's other stories. Although this is a subject I usually don't seek out, I was curious how she would treat the subject matter. What I found was that she has a way to paint a story in a most arousing way no matter which genre she choses. Needless to say...she taught me.

Matt_Next_Door

Very lovely, descriptive writing, and a story so well told.

Can't get enough of your beautiful words...

Can't get enough of your beautiful words...

A very hot series of stories. Naturally there is a bit of willing suspension of disbelief. Totally immersed in the story. Making it a favorite.

What a great story and incredibly described animalistic sex. I don't believe I've ever been that hard. I felt like I was buried deep inside Sara. Please write more. You have a great talent for storytelling. Thank you.

please have daddy open her ass. he needs to own and breed all his baby girl's virginal holes.