All Comments on 'Team Chemistry Ch. 02'

This should have been in the NON-CONSENT Category. But since I have read it, Leanne and Vicky should line up a train for Jenny and Rose and make sure they pull the train for a week or two and it should be nothing but big cocks. If they refuse, hook them on date rape drugs where they will not have a will and will do anywaything for a cock and not a pussy. Leanne should dismiss the entire team, ask the school board to outlaw a women's basketball team and then quite. Revenge is always sweet.

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Enjoyed part 2 hope the story continues on

It turned me on...keep it up...I love your writings.

one of my favorite stories of all time. Well done!

Any chance you'll write more about the Pandas? The Assistant Coach provides interestng possibilities. Hope you choose to write more some day.

This is one of the best FF d/s stories I ever read and another one is Summer Vacation which you did not even submit here. You have such a talent for writing lesbian d/s stories, I just wish there were more of them. I cannot garner any interest in MF stories, although I'm sure yours would be good if I could work up some interest. A lot of it is due to Literotica's classification system. Nonconsent and Reluctance tells you a little bit about the story but not the most significant thing. Incest tells you something about the story but not the most significant thing. THE MOST INPORTANT THING IS WHO IS INVOLVED! Two men, two women, a man and a woman? Another site - Nifty - firsts classifies the story as gay, lesbian, or bisexual! Then each class is broken into authorative, incest, etc. I certainly wish Literotica had been set up that way; I'm sure it's too late now. Nifty has been almost completely consumed by gay writers and the les section grows tinier each day,

I have a few stories here under the name leann511 but my log-in has been cancelled which somehow happens at Literotica every couple of years. I would sign up again but it would tell me there is already an account under that name even though I cannot actually use it! I'm just too tired to go through that again.

My email was cancelled too so I have a gmail account that sometimes works - lmclane48@gmail.com if you want to tell me how much I need to learn to mind my own busines.

The story was good, hot at times and really could use more chapters illustrating Leanne's total submission and commitment to Vicki and the team, plus Leanne leaving her husband for Vicki. Also, since Vicki is so strong, having her get the upper hand on both Jenny and Rose while giving each to her lover and Coach Leanne and Leanne having both Jenny and Rose naked, on their knees servicing her and Vicki. This could turn into a novel if written properly and received well by all or most readers.

More steamy sex plus illustrating Leanne submission to Vicki and Vicki's new Strap-on that has replaced Leanne's husband.

Loved the way you gave the reader Closure.

5🌟's

I rated the first part of this story 5 stars, but ended rating the second part 1.

It started good but then you twisted the storyline, in my head of this I liked Vicki in the Dominating role and i think i had looked forward to her control of her team, like you said she had in the 1 part. Then suddently Jenny takes over and everything from that point of the story goes downhill, which I think was a bad twist. However I do really hope you continue this story, but please bring Vicki back to herself, so she can get back to the dominating Captain role that suited her

summersault a variant spelling of somersault

Pedals isn't the same as Petals. Pedals is used on bicycles and Petals is the parts of the flower.

I think you mean PETALS