All Comments on 'Team Mates'

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AnyMooseAnyMooseover 1 year ago

This has multi-part story written all over it! Does Alan keep up with Tabby & Stacie? Can they keep it on the way down low and off the radar through graduation? O how soon do they get busted and by whom? If Heather, does she go nuclear? Is her father doing something stupid that makes him blackmailable? Does anyone else on the team make a run at him? Do I detect a certain interest by Lavender in her young student? Does he hook up with the Ames West coach? So many potential story lines; hoping you write these stories!

oldmanbill69oldmanbill69over 1 year ago

What is very much an excellent story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well done!!

tim0277tim0277over 1 year ago

I hope there are more chapters coming 5 stars

LeenysmanLeenysmanover 1 year ago

Kept expecting them to get caught, perhaps by Heather living nearby? But I suppose that could always happen in the sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story I especially enjoyed the accurate details.

pcman1950pcman1950over 1 year ago

5 & fave. Hoping for follow-ups.

pk2curiouspk2curiousover 1 year ago

OMG ! So EFING HOT . One of the best scenes/stories I've read in a while . Well done .

Crusader235Crusader235over 1 year ago

Wow, so f'in Hot, 5 stars. Hoping there's more to Cum. Like how far away is their college?

WoodencavWoodencavover 1 year ago

Fantastic storey, one of the best, but please, please continue it. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Hello All: Update as of May 2023. I have had people reach out to me regarding sequels to stories that I have posted on here, so let me address those first: "Mary's Innocent Passion." This is titled "Innocent Passion" on my page on Smashwords and my personal website. No seque...