All Comments on 'Tears of the Fallen Ch. 04'

but i loved what i got. good job!

I'm so in love with this series!! Kallum is my fav.....but Liam is definitely a close second. Can't wait for more!!!!!

Too short!! But fantastic as always :)

What an amazing twist. Loved it and wanted to keep reading. Please make your next submission twice as long.... I'm so hooked on your stories it borders on the ridiculous. I can't wait for more....

With all of my being HATE REASA. I HATE HER!!! AHHHHH. I'm so mad that she's Liam's mate and I don't give a crap about her 'healing process' or her pain and...grrrrrrrr! However, I still love your stories! But I'd rather read about Pietro. And Kothari. Not Reasa. She still needs to go die in a fire. End rant. :)

Amazing.... But please, please, please.....can u post longer chapters.....!!!!!!

I can't wait for Thereasa to have to deal with Freya. This is gonna be like World War V cause it's gonna be so intense it's gonna skip over the other two.

For the next chapter. Really enjoyed this chapter. Really enjoying all your stories.

Just as I was getting into it - it ends??? Ahhhhh Jaz - damnit!! You are the BEST BIATCH EVER! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

Still not to keen of Liam's mate, such a nasty piece of work I hope Freya scares the crap out of her!!! What a bitch poor Liam!

I liked the way you mirrored Ashliegh's pain against Theresa, Sort of like how Rafe connected with Freya in my all time favorite ALWH. Now, Freya wont kill her, Dayton will be the voice of reason, what about Elle? How will this affect her? Awesome chapter btw. 5 stars

I LOVE Freya! Queen wig snatcher Freya taking charge;; it will be awesome to watch this unfold.

Did not see that coming at all. Much love Jaz, thanks for another great chapter

but i think that reasa has not actually met the right ( for learning purposes) yet, what will she do or say to rayne?????

Ashley wants to help her son and asks Freya to take Thereasa to her family for a while.

that's it !!!

there - that's the whole chapter !!!

and you nedded two paiges for that ??? are you kidding me Jaz ???

Heartache in these first chapters. I feel like I've cried so much more during this story than the others. Great job making your readers actually feel the characters' emotions. Awesome as always! :)

I love it! Now I can go to sleep .. It's 3.16 am in Sydney, Australia

Thanks

So many comments are a testament to your skill as a writer. However, I do agree that you need more "pace" to your chapters. I wish that this was just a book, so I could finish the damn thing. Still!!!!!! I sure do love your word images of the characters.

Each of your couples share a place in my heart for different reasons and with Ash well I just can't help but love her as I struggled w/her thru everything she has been thru, and now this. She has a strength that I'm not sure any real person is capable of. Now it's all being brought back up and much much more added to it. Oh Nors I hope you are strong as you have always been because Ash is going to need that strength now more than ever. Liam will be ok because he has not only his parents but the other Varcolac. Thereasa on the other hand is going to be in Day and Fre home. And although Fre promises not to hurt her I don't think she's going to exactly welcome her either....hehe-he

Last comment...where is chapter 5???

I love the strength of your characters. How you develop each and everyone is just superb. What a wonderful talent you have. Mooooreeee please and write fast. Congrats again.

You see, I'm not like you, Thereasa. I don't tar an entire species with the same brush just because of the actions of a few. I don't hate and fear a race just because they're not something I understand."

Wonderful chapter Jaz

Another touchy n gonna be my favorite story of "JazCullen" . Women you are the best..!! and please don't make us wait long.. !!

And guess what?

It can be applied to humans too! (Just replace 'species' with 'ethnic background')

Way. Too. Short! More, more, more please!

You know Jaz, you are a wonder. I can't wait for more. I want for Liam to actually find a release. Something that is not mate related or emotionally straining, just a freaking break. I am not sure what that can be, but just for a moment of peace, that is what I wish for him. I am glad that he as a support system with his family and his pack, but could he have some sort of balm, even if it is for a moment. A conversation, a moment away, something. Sometimes a time out is necessary. It amazes me that the parents haven't figured out that their children need them in a way that they have not expressed. All of the Vârcolac need to find peace within themselves. They seem precariously imbalanced. Their connection keeps them from falling. I love them, but they make me sad because I feel that if they individually don't find their inner selves, then anything can happen. Lily has her mate, Kothi's mom has hers..., but remember when she was fighting her pull. There is such a wealth of love and despair in all the Vârcolac and I want for them to be well. Caleb should look at who he is supposed to be protecting and really look. Annie may not come back soon enough and since everyone is under his protection..., he needs a true and honest sit down with himself, with the parents, with the Vârcolac, with everyone. In all this protecting of the "children" who are now adults..., shockingly they are strong yet weak. Kothi has traits in him that he needs someone to understand. They are very dark and crave blood. Hmmm, who could he talk to? Elina can get blood thirsty in a real creative violent way. Hmmmm, who could she talk to. Liam's balance might be he has to get down & dirty and explosive is some way to release all of his emotional upheaval. Kallum, Mr. Alpha in training feels like a superpower period. Dara & Cassia have yet to reveal their need. But back to our just made human racist Thereasa. Now she needs an education. Hate is taught, and just like mold and bacteria it festers and grows and can kill. She needs some humility, some pain, some empathy, and some real loss and then maybe she might be good enough for Liam. He has claimed her, but she is not good enough for him. Something might need to be done to his wolf and he needs to find his balance while Ms. Thereasa learns that being hated for who you are is a waste of the gift of life. Jaz I am sure you have a plan for her and I absolutely love that Freya is the conduit. Freya has a unique way of looking at others...., this will be interesting. The underlying truth in all your stories is love, period. I cannot wait to watch this unravel. I did not forget Pietro who unwillingly has his sights on his future mate. LOL I did not forget Lily's baby, maybe that child or some others can help the Vârcolac find there balance or maybe it will be Dayton that enlightens Thereasa. This is fun reading. Can't wait for more. It seems that they all need to learn that sometimes life is hard and when we blindly take someone's actions to heart when our ego is bruised, sometime...., everyone needs a time out to sort out whose is right or wrong or neither or who needs to listen more and talk less. Just because love exists does not mean that it won't change. That whole ebb & flow and weaving layers to make things stronger..., holds true for love as well. (Thinking about Caleb and Annie) BTW - Demitri, Mara, Gard and his mate also need to observe the one's they love. Everyone is in need of understanding what's within. LOL

OMG - I am on a soap box. HA!!! You see what you do, Jaz. We are all involved with your characters. YOU ARE A FANTASTIC AUTHOR!!!!!

Should be interesting watching Reasa squirm under Freya's watch. Hot headed as she is, she has been one of your more insightful characters. If anyone can knock some kind of sense into that girl, literally or figuratively, Freya would be the ideal. candidate. Wonderful set up my friend.

G

Freya and Theresa in the same house... Poor Dayton! That was a great geat ch jaz and to see the struggle that Ash has and to over come it to protect her sons mate wow! can't wait for what happens in the house

Freya and a human that tried to kill her beloved nephew...oh me oh my.

a much anticipated and much appreciated chapter jazz, the dynamics and emotions heartfelt, the comedy with rafe and nors refreshing. waiting with bated breath for the next installment...

Nothing much happened in this chappy but the emotions and the dialogues were intense. It was well thought out. Even Reasa moving into Freya and Dalton's home is ...wa...I didn't see it coming. Good job! ^0^b

-Churos

Sigh, did feel long enough but :D something is always better than nothing. Poor Liam, I feel for him in this situation but I would be hard press not to hate that woman to.

To see what happens next. Reasa was just thinking that after what Annie/Annakatrine did to her the last species she'll be trusting is Vampires, so of course, now she gets to move in with one of the best. LOL. I'm guessing that Dayton is going to have to take the lead on this one. Liam needs to return to the Praetorians so Karn can help him and Elina can visit. :-) And the oh so wise "Queen" needs to wrap up her destination pity party and get home to clean up her mess...unless Caleb does it for her like he does everything else. Her "wisdon" led to the disbanding of the first Praetorians and her and Callain's deaths, the formation of the second Praetorians that led to the the near death and ruin of Pietro, infantilization of the Varcolac, near death of Liam, and possible damage to Rafe and Lacy's unborn children...have I left out any of her wise achievements?

Yes, and where is our Annie? I am wondering how our two fav. vamps are doing being seperated. I miss Dante as well, I hope your next update includes a little something with them in mind.

Great update!!

LOVED IT. TO DARN SHORT. CAN'T WAIT FOR FREYA TO GET A HOLD OF REESA. WRITE FAST.

Literotica. Literature in an erotica style. Your characters need a break. Everything is far too intense, As it should be, but still... Even a small, short but sweet scene in the next chapter would be much appreciated. Though you've probrobly allready got the next planned out.

The Story (caps) is fantastic. The emotion and writing equally surpassing as well. Nevertheless... Let's play lions. "Can you feel the love tonight?"

~Personal opinion xD

Yes this chapter was short. Yes I wish that things would be resolved between Liam and Reasa, BUT I actually do appreciate you taking your time with this. I think it shows your growth as a writer because you aren't just rushing through and giving instant gratification (tee, hee, hee). There were times when, even though a story had 20 chapters, it felt like things moved way too fast. I'm mostly thinking of Freya and Dayton here. Even after reading it a second time I still feel that their attitude's toward each other changed much too quickly when you consider their personalities and what they went through. I still love their story and those two.

Making things too long can be bad too though...but I think you'll find, or have already found a good balance and I wanted to let you know that at least one fan will appreciate that you give us anything at all and treat each new chapter as a lovely surprise and the gift it is without demanding you 'write more' or 'write faster'. Maybe this is because your stories 'feel' like novels to me, like I grabbed a Patricia Briggs contemporary off the shelf while waiting for her new book or something. Maybe I expect more because of that. And by more I just mean what I said above.

You've really drawn me in to your world and I find myself wishing I could meet some of these characters. Sometimes the lovey-dovey mate stuff gets annoying because things aren't really like that, but then again, this is fantasy. It's actually kind of nice to see Annie and Caleb at odds for this reason, and one can only hope that Caleb will find the inner balance he doesn't realize he is lacking and everyone can come to grips with what has happened. Then again, we're all here inserting ideas when you've most likely got it all mapped out in your head! When they aren't so perfect and aren't so forgiving it makes them more...shall I say, human ^_^. Especially Ashleigh, it's good to see her struggle with this because with her family it was expected she would behave that way. In this case to it's not surprising, but the fact that she's having such a rough time with it is refreshing, both to us as readers and I'm sure to you as the writer. But there I go making assumptions.

There's so much I would love to say on the topic of the hybrid's mates and all that, but in a way I don't want to go there (mostly in regards to Kallum) just because so many people have and while I would love to amuse you with some strange prediction that isn't anywhere close to the truth, I'm sure you've had a lot of that and are finding it a tad annoying. Oh boy this comment is long. Can you tell I'm procrastinating from school? I'm training to be a court reporting...you could dictate your stories to me and they would be translated to English in realtime with my program...no typing for you and I'd get to hear them right away! Haha, in a perfect world I think that's the kind of job I'd like (think Alex and Emma with Kate Hudson and Luke Wilson http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0318283/?ref_=fn_al_tt_1). I digress.

Thanks again for sharing this piece of your imagination with us all. I will focus on school and be pleasantly surprised when the next chapter is up (with lots of fangirl squeeing I'm sure).

Freya and Thereasa? Whatever happens there is sure to be interesting!

I love the slow moving story that you are creating atm. Kepp working on it.

It is SO annoying that almost every damn character in your story here cries! tears ! Give the ppl some backbone! And quit describing EVERY male as so huge that they barely fit thu the damn door! Bring some diversity in for fucksake! are you that ugly in real life thy ALL of your characters have to be so damn perfect and hot?? Imperfections and charisma is sexy too! woman you really need to Learn a lot.

I do believe this is Jaz's story to spin. Instead of criticizing her work, why don't you write your own story, since you appear to think you can do SO much better. I'm sure your characters will be emotionless little men, who have warts and beer bellies. I shudder to think how you would portray your women. I think I'll pass on reading that.

As for the men being huge? Um, hello? Can anyone say werewolves? Did you expect them to be puny? And her characters being hot and perfect? They're not human, they have inhuman beauty... so get over it. We might not know what Jaz looks like, but from your comment, it appears you're hideous on the inside; perhaps on the outside as well, since her perfect/hot characters seemed to have such a negative impact on you. Seriously, please, spare us faithful readers from your tiresome comments in the future. These authors put their work out because it's something they enjoy, they don't do it for profit. They don't own anyone anything. So what right do the readers (you) have to dictate how they should tell their story. It would appear YOU have a lot to learn.

That said, Jaz this was another wonderful chapter, and I do so look forward to reading the next. You've had me hooked since I first stumbled onto FTI (thank the gods), and I will remain hooked for as long as you continue the series. And should you ever get published, these will hold a special spot on my bookshelf.

Your ever faithful reader,

Cyn

Thank you, for a wonderful chapter. To the omg person people who criticize should at least have guts not do it as anonymous

Thank you for this chapter, I enjoyed the conversation between raesa & Ashleigh! I'm interested to see how Freya & Raesa get along hehe. Can't wait to read more about Pietro & Cassia :-)

Your a moron. She already set the stage for how vampires and were's are supposed to look in her story with the first installment of this series, FTI! She does bring diversity, through physical features like Pietro's new black eye, Freya's red,brown, and blond locks (which if i remember correctly are natural), even the fact that Rihanna is so god damn small. And i hate to point out that Aaron is actually alot smaller that Rafe and can fit through the damn door with no problems or having the issue of it being a tight squeeze. I think your just jealous that you can't right as well as she does. And instead of admitting to that jealous, you lash out at her by calling her stories unimaginative and saying she is ugly. I'm jealous of her creativity and writing ability, but I at least will openly admit to it.

Good chapter I like the fact that the other characters are not going to give Thereasa a pass on her crimes just because she is Liam's mate - he and the others deserve more than to be saddled with a twisted bigot.

"I would never have liked you, Thereasa, even if I had been a vampire in your coven. I could never like someone who holds such warped hatred in her heart." - I loved this, it is absolutely what I feel towards the character too. Yet, if anyone can make her see what sort of ugly fanatic she is, it is Freya.

But, I'm still not sure Thereasa is redeemable at all - it will be very difficult for me to even begin to empathise with such a hatefully twisted character, not even counting her treatment of Liam, she has showed absolutely no remorse for torturing and almost murdering Pietro - and he is one of the most illustrious of her precious pure-blood race. If she ever does realise what she is and what she has wrought, I wonder if it will be too little too late...

Also, to the anonymous (omg) individual too 'brave' to put a name to their little rant, I think you are missing the obvious point here. Physical human imperfections don't apply because the characters are NOT human. Jaz understands this, which is why there is cultural diversity aplenty in her characters. Their uber physicality is part of their being, which is one of the reasons why Pietro is suffering so much with both his physical and mental scars - it has wrecked his sense of self. Ironic that you harp on about physical attributes and totally dismiss the emotional landscape of characters - real people have emotions and in times of crisis, strong people DO cry, the fact you don't understand this says more about you than your shallow critique. I think it's you who has a lot to learn.

Callie

Please refrain from insulting Jaz like that. It is absolutely shameful that you would attack her like this because you don't like that she has established that werewolves are generally larger than humans. There is plenty of physical diversity among her characters.

On that note another great chapter Jaz! I like your plot twist with Liam and Reasa. I am intrigued as to what will happen with Kothi. I must say I have no sympathy for Reasa. Uh a horrid woman. But I hope Liam gets his happiness. I do wonder how Reasa will cope with the guilt if she ever gives up on her hatred.

I really dont agree with all the strong reactions to anonymous "omg" comments! Everybody is entitled to their own views(although they should be expressed politely!) which in this case is legitimate especially for someone new to Jazz's work. i think it also becomes very suspicious when all comments are positive.I believe that is why someone some years ago suspected Jazz of using alts to paste good comments( I strongly disagreed with that view btw!)

Another thing I disagree with is that posting an anonymous comment is cowardly! Just cos u know my lit id doesn't mean you have a clue to who I am or what I look like. For all you know Jazz could be a 2.4m black basketball player!!!!

I for one really liked Jazz's previous works esp fti and the council but find TOTF to be too emotional and maudlin'. Does that make me a bad person?

Another great chapter on my opinion.....been wondering where it would go from the last one. I am curious as to how this will go together too. Freya does seem a good choice to help Reasa and i can

t wait to see the form her help takes there are of course issues to work out but that is the same in any relationship. Some are unable to be worked out and some you have to work harder to resolve but i am sure this will happen.....we are all entitled to our opinions but there is no reason to be rude or nasty about them.....some of us are romantics with a core of steel when needed but i think Jaz has tried to include it all........just remember this is fantasy and all facts or situations will not be accurate as you see it but as the author sees it

I love the series and the path the stories are taking. The universe is unfolding beautifully. I just thought the interaction between Ashleigh and Thereasa was kind of off. The way Ashleigh tried to relate and then Thereasa's response seemed like every other story. I went through what you did so I know, I was saved by a vampire. It seems like that didn't fit. I am very excited for Freya's interaction with her though. We will have to wait and see

I always look forward to your next installment and far be it from me to tell someone with your talent how to write your story or the people in it.

but am looking forward to the focus being on characters I have some empathy for. I honestly wouldn't mind if someone killed Reasa. Liam would be collateral damage, but I'm actually okay with that too. His weakness is not attractive.

Let's get back to the Pietro situation. I'm on board for that.

I don't mean to sound ungrateful, but I gobbled up that chapter way fast. Lots of intense feelings. Please make them longer the next time. This was a snack. And I'm voracious for your chapters.

I love your stories but waiting for a new chapter isn't fun. PLEASE hurry with getting them submitted or at least make the chapters a tad longer??

Really interested in Pietro and Cassia's story, his vulnerability is sweet and more endearing than anything.

Please write more! I really love your stories. You have created a whole new world in my mind! I am grateful for that, but so annoyingly dependent on more!

Oh jaz! u do it every time! Yay! Love the freya - reesa twist. Would luv even more if you gave an in depth storyline to elina. Please dont gloss over her! Her character is a mystery and it would be fabulous if she was a true force to be reckoned with; and at the same a sensuous woman finding a partner who is worthy of her strength and vulnerabilities!!!

So far this is what I've come up with. Reasa got stripped of vampire side to know what it is like to be so vulnerable again. Then when or if she accepts that liam is her mate, his bite will make her were despite the fact he is hybrid, forcing her to understand were life. Then once she understands that annie will return her vampire side, making her the one thing she hates the most what she calls an abomination. I AM SOOOO LOOKING FORWARD TO SEEING IF MY THEoRY IS CORRECT!

I suggest you go back and reread hearts of warriors. Elina already has a mate, she just doesn't know it yet. Or she won't accept it, either way he knows she is his. He is simply wating for her.

Karn is her mate but he is as hesitant as she is. I am so proud of Freya and yes they are the perfect couple to help Reasa, even though I agree with both women but what Annie did as Queen was I think an even harsher punishment than death but oh yes the irony if she comes to accept Liam and then gets turned lol Onwards to read more

Well that is how it has seemed to me from past chapters.

The only one without a mate is Kallum i think

My all time favorite character in this series ever since she was first introduced!! I really hope to read more about her!

There are no black, Asian, or Spanish people in this entire series. I find that kind of odd.

I love getting back to the basics and reading dialogue between Dayton and Freya :)

What has spanish or black or italian got to do with this story..its a wonderful piece of art that I daresay I enjoy more than most.. Just enjoy the story and by the way thereasa is described as having a caramel skin tone which rules out her being white..

this may be a mute point here.......but remember that they now have her gun with pure poison in the bullets.....why are they not anglicizing the pure stuff.....instead of the degraded or diluted stuff........... it took me this long to figure out this is not right that they now have a pure sample to work with....................Just a question.........

...as a male who has had to deal with dangerous real life situations. The best way to have convinced Freya to accept Theressa as a boarder.

Would be to keep the woman assassin situated where she could be continuously monitored and controlled by the powerful and experienced and ravening paranoid vampire, Freya.

And I agree with the question about the weapon, the cartridges of poison and all the other gear Theressa had.

I agree with anonymous below that we should just enjoy the story....who cares that there is an absence of the other races....? Plus Asian and Spanish mythology has no vampires or were...they have their own cultures of Gods and ghosts and spirits...so to the anonymous who wondered about it - write your own story if that bothers you too much.

*lil quirk of grin*

Have you not been paying any attention? Pietro is of Spanish origins. And if you pay attention to Reasa's description, you would realize that the caramel skinned assassin from Europe is definitely not a white girl.... Just sayin'.

I've read this one and the 2 before this and I am loving it. I do hope this is not the last story line in this amazing FTI series. Just so you know its fetal position ....you and the editors have made this mistake a bunch of times in your stories and I had to point it out to you.

Sorry to nit pick but just as proper spelling is 'colour' not 'color'' as taught by us schools. You will find that foetal is how we in the U.K. or indeed most commweath countries would spell the word. So it's not actually incorrect.

Liking series btw.

I don't anyone really listened to Anakatrine when she cast her spell on Reasa. In Hearts of Warriors ch. 20 page 3 Anakatrine's exact words in her spell was the following:

"As the first vampire was born with the blood of his Queen, did she bequeath to him his strength, his vitality, his speed and his everlasting life. Her blood flowed in his veins; her blood made him what he was. As she once gave, now do I take back that which was always mine to give and will forever be mine to retrieve. I take back my blood, my honour, and my protection unto the day you should be worthy to once more know my benevolence.

Anakatrine left Reasa with an option. Surprised that Kaleb didn't catch this but dang he was so pissed that Annie was not falling to her knees when he barked out his orders. Was this the first time that the Queen had put him in his place?. And I would have thought Demetri would have been quick enough to catch it.