by youngandexperienced
Even though it was quite predictable, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Sequel?
I wasn’t expecting much from a clearly unoriginal story, but I at least expected some anal fucking. That’s what the “anal” tag is for. Putting fingers in an ass is called “assplay”.
Loved it. .. I need to hire a pool boy. I would like that massage ... I will be laying out tomorrow afternoon. Come on by, I am wet and ready.....
Story was okay, but very predictable. Unfortunately nothing to distinguish it from several other 'pool boy' stories I've read here.
Fantastic story!
Really got me going. I have had fantasies like this before!
love this author :) dont listen to that neanderthal going under 'anonymous'. I noticed a few minor errors but nothing more :)
N.B to 'Anonymous'
- considering 'Leaned' nor 'Lent' was mentioned at any point in this story, we can only assume you are incredibly ignorant. This was a really good story and the things you are criticising are non existent.
If you are referring to the use of 'leant' - this is a perfectly acceptable as it is the past tense of 'leaned'.
Please do not criticise other stories as an anonymous user, especially when you are wrong.
Looks like we have another conceited critique on our hands.
Another author who needs seriously to learn the proper terms for items. Such as "lent" means to loan something; while "leaned" is to bend down/over something. Far different meaning yet this author seems not to know the difference.
I'm getting paid $ per visit for the pool, she is just icing on the cake.